What I Need to Work On

Although I stated earlier that my organizational skills have gotten better when I am writing, they still need a lot of work. It is hard for me to tell when to end a paragraph because I can't stop a thought when I get the ball rolling. I feel as if my papers are on continuous thought instead of six or seven separate paragraphs. I'm going to go on a short rant, if that's okay. I don't get paragraphs in short papers. I feel as if they are almost used for aesthetics. Paragraphing my papers is my number one enemy in my writing, but I get that they aren't going away.

I also need to work on my vocabulary and my thought process. If I had it my way, I wouldn't proofread the paper besides checking for spelling and grammar. That way the best emotion is shown from the author. These areas of my writing are important because they are holding me back from being the most effective writer I can be. It would also be much more pleasing to me if I could learn how to paragraph.